How's My Driving?

[tadashiwashere]

Here's the thing -- I've never played Tadashi before and I've been out of the rp world for a long time.
I tend to get excited and dive headlong into things, but I'm always looking for things to improve. This isn't just a HMD for my characterization,
but also my writing. I absolutely will not take offense if you have some helpful pointers for things I can improve on.
Especially if you actually tell me where to go to learn about the stuff I'm bad at. Like punctuation. And fragments.

Seriously, though. If Tadashi is off in any way, let me know and I will do my best to improve.

Edit as of 4/12/18: Whoa boy, I am coming at RP out of left field. All of the above still applies twice as hard as ever. And I do know about the tense shifting thing, if that's bothering anyone. I'm doing some research to try to hammer it into my brain and fix it as quickly as possible.

Comments

[socksaway]

You are awesome and your Tadashi is so good. I am guilty of refreshing our threads waiting for tags eagerly because they're that fun. You are also a lovely person out of character.

P.S. You are hard to crit anonymously because you have anon off and IP logging on. I had to make a sock account for this, feel the shame of making me expend effort to love you.

[tadashiwashere]

Oh no sorry! How do I turn that off?

[socksaway]

Go to account settings -> privacy -> enable all commenters -> log no ip address.

But only if you want to, I was teasing! But this way you'll never know who's love burns so bright for your Tadashi tags.

[tadashiwashere]

I think I did it! Did I do it? I AM SO BAD AT THIS, I AM SORRY.

Also, it makes me flail forever that people actually like my Tadashi. It's been so long since I RPed, and I was so nervous about playing him at first. ;-; *adores!*

[(Anonymous)]

Yep, you seem to have done it!

I think you're doing great. I sometimes worry I may be bothering you too much, that's how much I love our CR.

[tadashiwashere]

I NEVER FEEL BOTHERED BY ANYONE. I love my CR with everyone, anon friend. I'm just sorry I can't tag back quicker! I always have a full inbox, and I worry that I'm too slow for people.

[(Anonymous)]

Don't worry about being too slow! Real life always comes first, and your tags are pure awesomeness that are worth waiting for.

[tadashiwashere]

YOU ARE SO SWEET, ANON FRIEND. Comments like these encourage me to tag faster!